You were passing through a dark street in your locality when you got bitten by one of the stray dog. Write a letter to your mayor. In the letter write:
Describe the incident
Ask your mayor to get rid of the stray dogs in your society
Also ask him to lit up your society streets.
Dear Mr. Anderson,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you to express my concern about the incident took place with me last night. As usual, I was returning home from work when I was passing through the alley on Woodland Avenue around 8 pm. The stray dogs attacked at me and I was bitten hard on my leg by one of them. Luckily, I managed to escape from there.
The rapid growth of stray dogs is a serious problem for our locality. I think animal rescue organizations can help us. They are dedicated to pet adoption and take stray pets and attempt to find suitable homes for them. Also, they look after for their food, shelter, and vaccination until they do not get adopted by someone.
The other trouble is with the street lights in the alley which are not working from the last few weeks. I request you to please take immediate action to resolve both of the problems as soon as possible to avoid any future inconveniences.
Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Peter Evans
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind such as reading and doing word puzzles Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time Discuss two views and give your opinion 67
- The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest? 84
- Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour Therefore the working hours should be reduced To what extent do you agree or disagree 81
- You are living overseas and you have just come across an article about your country in a magazine where some of the information are incorrect. Write a letter to the editor. In the letter, you should: – explain that an article contains wrong information 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49180327869 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37099285002 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68306010929 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.341008463 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2307692308 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179543474251 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558922930461 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453872448172 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770240897031 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391895304606 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.