Dear Ekta,
Hello, how are you? I hope everything is fine. I am writting this letter to applogize to not attend your marrige due to bad circumsatnces.
First, congratulations for your marrige. I would like to tell you that as you know how i am happy for your marrige. I had already made a plan with my mom to attend your marrige function. I had already booked tickets a month ago. My mother was also so excited for your marrige. Suddenly my mother was slipped from stairs and she got injury on right foot. Doctor suggested to take a rest for a mone month. That's why we were not attend your marrige.
I really feel bad, i was not with you on your special day. But as you know nobody in my home expect me to take care of my mother. I hope you will understand my situation. I shall make a plan within 2-3 months to meet you. I hope you are happy at your law's house.
Warm regards to your in law's family. Happy married life. Hoping to see you soon.
Yours lovingly,
Savita
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d like to tell you that as you know how i am happy for your marrige. I had alread...
^
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...my mom to attend your marrige function. I had already booked tickets a month ago....
^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
... had already booked tickets a month ago.My mother was also so excited for your mar...
^^
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Suddenly
...er was also so excited for your marrige.Suddenly my mother was slipped from stairs and s...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Doctor
...stairs and she got injury on right foot.Doctor suggested to take a rest for a mone mon...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested taking'.
Suggestion: suggested taking
...and she got injury on right foot.Doctor suggested to take a rest for a mone month.Thats why we we...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thats
...ggested to take a rest for a mone month.Thats why we were not attend your marrige. ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ggested to take a rest for a mone month.Thats why we were not attend your marrige. ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'attended'.
Suggestion: attended
... for a mone month.Thats why we were not attend your marrige. I really feel bad, i w...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...end your marrige. I really feel bad, i was not with you on your special day. B...
^
Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e a plan within 2-3 months to meet you. I hope you are happy at your laws house. ...
^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you soon. Yours lovingly, Savita
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45054945055 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58297866245 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60989010989 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.5189187347 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.625 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.375 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251986027116 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872989804168 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532978250522 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123701465154 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545242906765 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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