It is well said, " Students are tomorrow's leader". Education is one of the basic right of humans. Education is the key of success. But nowdays Online cources are become popular rather than traditional classes cource. Some learners prefer online learning and others prefer traditinal learning. But both have some merits.
One one hand, traditinal learning/ cources have some benefits. First, the most important thing is better interaction between students & teachers, students & students. Online machine can give the only lesson but it cannot figure out whethet student has understood the concept or not. Interaction beween students and students, it helps not only improve the knowledge but also reinforce to new learning. In addition, in classroom it provide an excellent oppurtunity to fill gaps. Moreover, tranditional classes are good way to improve communication skills.
On other hand, online courses certainly have numerous advantages. First, online cources are cheaper rather than traditinal learning. Poor students who cannot afford expensive college education, they and earn skills and earn degrees by online learning. Another advantage of online cource is flexibilty. It is good for working person. You can take them whenever you want and from where you are.
In my opinion, traditional class is the best way to better learning. In class romm students have different qualities. You can receives various viewpoints which can help you to reach your own conclusion.
In conclusion, both have different merits. Online cources are more beneficial for those person who are not time for regularclasses. For example - woking person has not time. Usually people take online courses to increase their qualification and also increase career oppurtunities in thier job. But traditional learning is more helpful and better way of learning and motivates students to achive their goles.
regards,
Savita Pal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65862068966 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86275501618 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8178535854 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.64 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.84 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160037780427 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398513200408 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561003994968 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931089359248 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889418934337 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.36 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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