You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
• Explain where you live
• Describe the problem
• Give reasons why you do not want this development
I am writing in connection with your published article about developing local airport dated on 24th, June.
I live in Bringtone Street which is located in airport neighborhood. As you know, we are countering many troubles by doing these extensions so these conditions will be worsen.
The first problem is noise pollution which is made by airplanes when they are landing and taking off. Passengers and their attendances are also other factors for intensifying this situation that is very disturbing.
Another serious problem is overcrowding and traffic that are made by people and their cars in main street and neighborhood streets moreover, lacking of parking space causes to persecute residents.
Finally, as you are aware there is no park or recreational facilities in this area for people who live in this region.
These problems are serious, so please reflect these issues to responsible persons to bring to mind.
Yours faithfully,
Mitra Riahi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'persecuting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: persecuting
...reover, lacking of parking space causes to persecute residents. Finally, as you are aware...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36842105263 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83454159235 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717105263158 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5505047436 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186974557883 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699008570546 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546320159481 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761251968197 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631016929255 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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