You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of
flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
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explain where you live
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describe the problem
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give reasons why you do not want this development
DEAR SIR,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO EXPRESS MY GRIEVEANCE REGARDING THE RECENTLY SANCTIONED MUMBAI AIRPORT PLAN 2018.
I AM A RESIDENT OF VASANT KUNJ WHICH IS IN VICINITY OF THE MUMBAI AIRPORT. MY WINDOWS IS ADJACENT TO THE WALLS OF THE AIRPORT.
I READ ABOUT THE UPCOMING PROJECT TO ENHANCE THE AREA AND ESCALATE THE AMOUNT OF PLANES FROM THE AIRPORT. I AM HAPPY TO HEAR THAT OUR GOVERNMENT IS TAKING INITIATIVES FOR THE UPLIFMENT OF TRANSPORTATION SYSTEM OF THE CITY. ALTHOUGH, I WOULD LIKE TO BRING TO YOUR NOTICE THAT THE CHANGES IN THE PROJECT CAN CREATE SOME ISSUES WITH THE RESIDENTS LIVING IN THE VICINITY. ACCORDING TO TE THE NEW MAP THE WALL OF THE AIRPORT WILL BE CONSTRUCTED IN SUCH A WAY THEE WOULD BE COMMON WALL OF THE VASANT KUNJ APPARTMENT AND THE AIRPORT.
AS A RESULT OF THIS, THE PRIVACY OF THE LOCAL PEOPLE WILL BE DISRUPT BECAUSE THERE WOULD BE A PUBLIC PROPERTY JUST ADJACENT TO THEIR HOME.I HAVE A FAMILY CONSISTING OF ELDERLY PEOPLE AND INFANTS.THE ONGOING DEPARTURES AND ANNOUNCEMENTS IN THE STATION WILL CREATE A HUGE AMOUNT OF SOUND WHICH WILL CREATE DISTURBANCE TO MY FAMILY MEMBERS.
THEREFORE, I REQUEST YOU TO EITHER REJECT OR MODIFY THE UPCOMING CHANGES IN THE AIRPORT. I WOULD BE GRATEFUL IF YOU COULD DO THE NEEDFUL.
YOURS SINCERELY
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “ALTHOUGH” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...T OF TRANSPORTATION SYSTEM OF THE CITY. ALTHOUGH, I WOULD LIKE TO BRING TO YOUR NOTICE ...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ON SYSTEM OF THE CITY. ALTHOUGH, I WOULD LIKE TO BRING TO YOUR NOTICE THAT THE CH...
^^
Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...IC PROPERTY JUST ADJACENT TO THEIR HOME.I HAVE A FAMILY CONSISTING OF ELDERLY PEO...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74553571429 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67498271499 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5534099697 44.8134815571 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.3 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18963837413 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805884889022 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515256637942 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990804198641 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603298873447 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.