You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport.
Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter
explain where you live
describe the problem
give reasons why you do not want this development
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction on the idea of expanding the regional airport as it will be a major safety concern to the residents of the locality.
My residence is in Gulistan-e-Johar society which is five minutes drive away from the airport. The society comprises of multiple blocks approximately 10 - 12 with each block having 10 stories.
The project of airport expansion will result in a serious safety hazard for the people living in the vicinity. As the number of flights will increase after the closure of the project, the landing and take-off of flights with tall buildings in the proximity can lead to fatal accidents resulting in loss of lives of both the passengers and the local living in the near-by area.
Furthermore, it will cause noise pollution and will be a security risk. We have seen past incidents where airports, being a strategic asset, have been targeted. Moreover, considering the tension with the neighboring country, the authorities are requested to reconsider the decision taken again and shift the airport in an area with less civilian population.
I hope the authorities will take up this matter and will review the decision of expansion.
Regards,
X.Y.Z
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my d...
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...ncern to the residents of the locality. My residence is in Gulistan-e-Johar soci...
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...rive away from the airport. The society comprises of multiple blocks approximately 10 - 12 w...
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...- 12 with each block having 10 stories. The project of airport expansion will re...
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...d the local living in the near-by area. Furthermore, it will cause noise polluti...
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... an area with less civilian population. I hope the authorities will take up this...
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... will review the decision of expansion. Regards, X.Y.Z
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...the decision of expansion. Regards, X.Y.Z
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...ion of expansion. Regards, X.Y.Z
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...on of expansion. Regards, X.Y.Z
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17326732673 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9141418244 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638613861386 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2639155694 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.111111111 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106472916015 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356733291642 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039410668213 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532072200571 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474113582886 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 8.71597938144 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.