You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a
letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Ask for some suggestions for what to do
Find out if there are any local events happening at the time
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Trisha M. and I am from Darjeeling.I will be visiting Nainital next month with my 3 friends.I am writing this letter to make an enquiry about few things which I have mentioned during our stay.We will stay there for a week.Though I have made some research about your hotel and came to know it is one of the best place to stay.
First,Let us know about the activities to do during our stay. For example,is there any shopping area nearby where we can visit and do shopping?Also,would like to know whether there will be any beach,fort,temple etc. to visit.Is there any arrangement to go for trekking?
As we are visiting few days before the festival of Diwali,will there be a local event happening at that time?What will be the amount to be paid if we want to take part in any local event or is it free for tourists?
Hope you will help me with all above queries.
Looking forward for your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Trisha M.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-07-06 | SKN | 73 | view |
| 2020-08-24 | nidhimehta | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60115606936 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8459272093 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.7418845673 44.8134815571 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 88.4444444444 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289899905335 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104188216902 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647150208764 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140067701342 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459088017327 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.