Dear Manager,
I am writing to ask permission on leaves regarding the preparation of my final exams. As you know 3 months back I applied an exam called MOH, its final date has released yesterday, and the test will be on March 25th, so I have to hardly prepare for my future ambition. For me, this test is mandatory to pass to go Dubai.
For my preparation, I require one and of month duration, but for me 25 days enough to complete my hard work. I will be happy if you sanction leaves that what I expected and I shall come back as soon as completed my test.
No need to worry about my absent at work meanwhile I shall do my task from home while finishing day by day work I will send my task along with my friend even he has been staying nearby my home and also he too member of our staff. I would be grateful if you sanction my leaves
I look forward to receiving your response
Thank you Sir,
Yours sincerely,
A. Siva Sankar
- Some people believe that is better to live and work in a vertical city with multiple tall buildings, as compared to an horizontal city with fewer tall buildings. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- While studying some students take weekend or evening jobs to help with expenditure. How do you feel about this? What are the drawbacks and benefits of such a decision? 78
- People today move to new cities or new countries more than ever before. What challenges do they experiences? What strategies are there to meet these challenges? 89
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past Do you agree or disagree 63
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld be grateful if you sanction my leaves I look forward to receiving your respons...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u Sir, Yours sincerely, A. Siva Sankar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22777777778 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35059094225 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672222222222 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0613719413 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171236849461 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767247034058 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066897226057 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896772810644 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0076911131143 0.0580467560999 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.55 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.