Dear Manager,
I am writing to request an unpaid leave starting next Monday.
For the last one month, I have been attending a part-time course for Database Management and Analysis at the local university. Now that I am done with the theoretical part of the course, the next half involves attending a field work which is going to take place in another city. My presence is must as my performance will be evaluated based on the presentations I give and the project I submit.
The duration of this trip is 4 weeks and starts next Monday. Keeping this in mind, I finished all the tasks needed for the rest of the month. Also, I assigned some duties to my assistant Katie. Meanwhile, I will be regularly checking my emails for any emergencies, and I will be available on my mobile phone for the same.
I would be grateful if you can allow me this leave. This is very important for me. Thank you in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Jonathon Trott
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6449704142 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.642672711 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6749991668 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4166666667 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175472247067 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615073283046 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411955961396 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791952125722 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555343920376 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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