You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter:
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear John,
I am writing to request some days off from work.
I have been invited to my cousin's birthday party who is a great actor. I have been waiting for these days from two months ago, and I am counting down the hours until it comes. I am so excited Because I can see my favorite movie stars there. So it is a big chance for me to be there and socialize with them.
The party is going to be held at 6 PM on 31 May in Tehran. As those people are so elite and special, I need at least three days off to buy some clothes and prepare myself to go there. Of course, I could shrink this for two days, but I put one extra day for unexpected matters, which may cause delays in my arrival.
Although we have no specific orders from our customers at the end of the month, Abbas has excepted to do my duties. He is aware of the responsibilities such as answering emails and responding to client's requests. Of course, I will be in touch with him. so there is no worry at all.
I look forward to hearing from you.
pouria mirzaei
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I am writing to request some days off fr...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...counting down the hours until it comes. I am so excited Because I can see my favo...
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Line 6, column 254, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...Of course, I will be in touch with him. so there is no worry at all. I look forw...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Pouria
... I look forward to hearing from you. pouria mirzaei
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng from you. pouria mirzaei
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, at least, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18316831683 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29816568872 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643564356436 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5640411147 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0810584344001 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027371395707 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437693495272 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686108777213 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593946513399 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.