Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends.
They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends.
In your letter:
thank them for the photos and the holiday
explain why you didn't write earlier
invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Ali
Having seen the photos that you sent to me last night, and I can't stop laughing at the all moments we made last month.
I feel so grateful for visiting you after such a long time. To be honest, that was the best holiday that I ever had in my entire life. You guys were terrific. And these photos, I absolutely have no idea how you took these pictures of mine without notifying me.
Please accept my apology for my delay in catching you up. As soon as I arrived at my home, I got involved with my job and postponed tasks. Then I got warning from my boss. She was a little bit angry with me .so little free time that I could spend on my emails. But now, I am fine.
So, I really want you to come here and stay in my place for the following holidays in march. There is a cool breeze at nights, but inside is warm, and we have plenty of options to do and have fun. I promise you will never get bored.
Thanx and wish to see you again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s that you sent to me last night, and I cant stop laughing at the all moments we mad...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...n I got warning from my boss. She was a little bit angry with me .so little free time that...
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Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...boss. She was a little bit angry with me .so little free time that I could spend o...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, then, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.98947368421 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.98808082682 2.54303337028 78% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668421052632 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0788328644 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.1428571429 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235381746904 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080773171092 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578987637082 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142611710006 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052575532461 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 8.37731958763 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.27 8.71597938144 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.