You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Dear Library Custodian,
I have borrowed four 'Auditing Theory' books that is due for me to return this Monday. I won't be able to fulfill that commitment and for that reason, I am writting this letter.
I was informed over the weekend that my mother got into cardiac arrest and is needing by pass surgery. My siblings and I flew back to our province and would stay here until my mother recover.
I would like to express my deepest apology and also request kind consideration for my case. I would return those books as soon as I can and hopefully my penalties are not that steep.
In our estimate, we might stay over a month here. I would also entertain a response on any alternative action I can take. I have packed two of the books with and left the others back in the dormitory, thus, sending thru a courier is not an option. I really need your understanding in this trying times.
Warm regards,
Aljun
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t reason, I am writting this letter. I was informed over the weekend that my m...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...t my mother got into cardiac arrest and is needing by pass surgery. My siblings and I flew...
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Line 9, column 249, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ending thru a courier is not an option. I really need your understanding in this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57228915663 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47877475481 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4523670383 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961557032419 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348408031805 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520071199099 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0475681116093 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042286678336 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.