You borrowed some books from your school or college library. Unfortunately, you have to go away to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books in time.
Write a letter to the library. Explain what has happened and tell them what you want to do about it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to apprise you that I will be unable to return the books which I borrowed from the school library on a weak loan .I am very sorry about this delay but I cannot help it.
After taking the books out on 9th May, I planned to return them before 16th May. But unfortunately I received an urgent call from my cousin that my aunt had fallen ill last evening and was admitted to a hospital. Her condition is bit serious as I am very close to her so tonight I will catch a flight to see her. I plan to stay there for couple of days to look after her.
However, I am due to return the books by the day after tomorrow, which I cannot do. Since I have always return the books on time. So considering the situation, I hope you will waive the late fee submission.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to apprise you ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d from the school library on a weak loan .I am very sorry about this delay but I c...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...from the school library on a weak loan .I am very sorry about this delay but I ca...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out this delay but I cannot help it. After taking the books out on 9th May, I...
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Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...dmitted to a hospital. Her condition is bit serious as I am very close to her so to...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... day after tomorrow, which I cannot do. Since I have always return the books on time....
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26506024096 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38858270391 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644578313253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.98508286 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234541512768 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923523242072 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736979456763 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1617563438 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677429376136 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.