You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you offer a ticket to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Explain detailed the concert.
• Why you are unable to go
• How can your friend receive the ticket?
Dear Ben,
How have you been? Hope you are doing great. Remember, last time when we met we were discussing Bran Adam's concert which was soon going to be in our city. The performance will take place at the College Grounds, South Block that is quite near to your place and the same will be broadcasted on the local channel. it will be a great moment to see your favourite rockstar so closely.
I bought the ticket for the same on a good discounted rate but I will not be able to stick to the plan as I have to travel to attend a conference. However, I was trying to schedule it for next week but none of the speakers is available hence, cannot be ignored.
So instead of letting it go why don't you go and enjoy the show and record it for me as well. you can come to my place tomorrow or on Friday to collect anytime after 8 PM.
Let me know if you are interested or not.
Regards,
Chris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ben, How have you been? Hope you are doing gr...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ll be broadcasted on the local channel. it will be a great moment to see your favo...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nored. So instead of letting it go why dont you go and enjoy the show and record it...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... the show and record it for me as well. you can come to my place tomorrow or on Fri...
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Line 6, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t me know if you are interested or not. Regards, Chris
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you are interested or not. Regards, Chris
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1724137931 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25070268383 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1347290351 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240238354198 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835918066713 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504477989946 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130035780966 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558301968988 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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