Write a letter to the environment officer in your area complaining about the garbage problem in your neighbourhood and say
- What is causing the problem?
- Why is it bothering you?
- Suggest a solution to rectify the problem.
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Dear Sir, <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">This letter is in regards to bring the garbage problem of our area to your kind notice. I stay
in St. </span><span class="hiddenspellerror">Cavender's</span> Street, California that comes under your jurisdiction. It <span class="hiddenspellerror">has become</span> a predicament for us. We have never faced such a situation before this. It is been two weeks since municipality workers have not come to pick the waste from our society and it is just accumulating. However, it has become egregious and is unavoidable now. <o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">The waste is coming out of the bins and is littering </span>the corner of the road. As you are aware that this is a rainy season and this is going to create a havoc for residents. In addition, <span class="hiddensuggestion">whenever</span>, the wind blows, the foul smell is not bearable at all. </p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">There are plethora of measures that </span><span class="hiddengrammarerror">can be</span> taken to eradicate this persistent catastrophe. I would suggest that corporation should arrange a session to educate the people and should implicate a law against this menace which <span class="hiddengrammarerror">are threat to</span> people's life.
I look forward to hearing from you. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Yours faithfully, </span><o:p></o:p></p><span pre="" style="cursor: default;"><p class="MsoNormal"><span class="hiddenspellerror"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Nisha</span></span><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;"> <span class="hiddenspellerror"></span><span pre="Nisha " style="cursor: default;">Bhan</span></span></p></span>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...und-clip: initial;'>This letter is in regards to bring the garbage problem of our area t...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s;>are threat to peoples life. I look forward to hearing from you.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 3.85567010309 493% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3660.0 937.175257732 391% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 364.0 206.0 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.0549450549 4.54256449028 221% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 3.78020617076 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.48815031734 2.54303337028 334% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442307692308 0.622605031667 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 940.5 290.88556701 323% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.6 1.41237113402 184% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 368.896034166 44.8134815571 823% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 281.538461538 76.5299724578 368% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 28.0 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0160373754542 0.216113520407 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0125049435717 0.0766984524023 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0162953029097 0.0603063233224 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0250342996709 0.12726935374 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258615356976 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 8.37731958763 476% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -41.54 70.7449484536 -59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 3.82989690722 475% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.0 7.45979381443 349% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 41.31 8.71597938144 474% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 41.2886597938 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 8.62886597938 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 26.0 8.15463917526 319% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.