you bought a new home recently and you want to hire an interior decorator. write a letter to interior decorator seeking information about his services.
in your letter;
let him know how you came to know about his work or name.
specify about your home.
discuss your furnishing taste
Dear Mr. Dhillon,
The objective of writing this letter is to gain some important information regarding the decoration services which are provided by you. Actually, I bought a new house in model town. Therefore, I have a desire to decorate the interior part of my house in order to add charm to beauty of condominium.
Last week, I went to my friend house and shared my plan to hire professional decorator with her. She gave me your reference and also told about your proficiency level in your work. This house has two bedrooms, kitchen, a hall and one play room for my sweet child. The size of house is about 2500 square feet. It will be best for us if you use natural and sober material for decoration. What is more, play room decoration must be in blue color with red-sand stone. Adding colorful lights into ceiling will upsurge the standard of beauty.
Hope you do your best and would start up the work in this week. I really want to know about the expected budget for whole adorable decoration of the interior side of my house. I solicit your work in advance and looking forward to see the fabulous decoration in interior part of my new home.
Yours sincerely,
Happy
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Essay evaluation report
to gain some important information regarding the decoration services which are provided by you.
to gain some important information regarding your decoration services. //keep simple
in order to add charm to beauty of condominium.
in order to add charm and beauty to the condominium.
I went to my friend house and shared my plan to hire professional decorator with her.
I went to my friend's house and shared with her my plan to hire professional decorators.
I went to my friend's house and shared with her my plan to hire a professional decorator .
looking forward to see the fabulous decoration
looking forward to seeing the fabulous decoration //looking forward to doing something...
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flaws:
1. No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
2. this paragraph is extra:
Hope you do your best and would start up the work in this week. I really want to know about the expected budget for whole adorable decoration of the interior side of my house. I solicit your work in advance and looking forward to see the fabulous decoration in interior part of my new home.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 211 250
No. of Characters: 936 1200
No. of Different Words: 131 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.811 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.436 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.383 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.067 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.893 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.566 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will upsurge the standard of beauty. Hope you do your best and would start up...
^^^
Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...our work in advance and looking forward to see the fabulous decoration in interior par...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...part of my new home. Yours sincerely, Happy
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, really, regarding, so, therefore, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63033175355 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46153673374 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63981042654 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1493989849 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7857142857 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281138640483 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864824745451 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648134384608 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195600919321 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721560499457 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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