History sets a foundation of successful development for every nation. Currently, history subject is mandatory for school goers. However, few masses assert that learning history is no longer of that importance. Here, i would like to account for reasons why people should study past and what will be impact on offspring if they lack the history knowledge.
There are manifold reasons to learn history. First and foremost, learning history allows people to know the past happenings and cultural heritage. To demonstrate, children can learn social, traditional and cultural values if history subject taught to them. Beside this, they not only know about the freedom fighters but also get knowledge about their sacrifices and achievements. Consequently, it promotes respect towards their culture and country. Definitely, it help to preserve the culture of any nation.
Further, people who read history came to know about the consequences of mistakes which were done by ancestors. Eventually, they will make wise decision for same concerns. What is more, history helps children to develop spirit of patriotism. To illustrate, they follow their martyrs and give importance to national days celebration. Thence, children feel proud of nation and keep themselves attached to the cultural heritage of country. Therefore, history plays paramount role to develop country by leaps and bounds in this modern era.
Several impact of non- teaching history can be mentioned. To embark with, youngsters may lack the social, moral and cultural values if they do not learn the history. Hence, they become disrespectful towards their heritage. Adding to it, unlike history learner, they will not contribute in the development of country as they not have interest in past. Apart from it, the trend of not teaching the importance of history can lead to loss of cultural values.
To recapitulate, children are the national builders. Therefore, teaching history is need of an hour and history is essential part of country. Thus, history subject should be compulsory in all schools.
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Essay evaluation report
Definitely, it help to preserve the culture of any nation.
Definitely, it helps to preserve the culture of any nation.
they will make wise decision for same concerns
they will make wise decisions for same concerns
they will make a wise decision for same concerns
history plays paramount role
history plays a/the paramount role
as they not have interest in past.
as they do not have interest in past.
history is essential part of country
history is an/the essential part of a country
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flaws:
don't repeat words, for example, a lot of 'help' in the essays.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 323 350
No. of Characters: 1681 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.239 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.204 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.624 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.458 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.131 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.542 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.478 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... is no longer of that importance. Here, i would like to account for reasons why p...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...eir culture and country. Definitely, it help to preserve the culture of any nation. ...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...martyrs and give importance to national days celebration. Thence, children feel prou...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun impact seems to be countable; consider using: 'Several impacts'.
Suggestion: Several impacts
...leaps and bounds in this modern era. Several impact of non- teaching history can be mention...
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Line 7, column 343, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...nt of country as they not have interest in past. Apart from it, the trend of not teachi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40557275542 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75639179924 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56346749226 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9366218599 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.75 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4583333333 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202241677346 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551385181713 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456581203099 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116854974217 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02646786916 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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