:You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to
• explain the reason why you decline the offer
• express your gratitude
• explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to a recent interview and subsequent offer from your esteemed organization.
I was very much looking forward to joining you guys but I am afraid to say that I have to decline the offer as the offered compensation does not match my expectation. The technology experts in a similar role with other companies are paid better compensation from what I am being offered clearly indicating that it is not the market rate.
However, I am thankful for the hiring manager and the human resource team for taking the time to go through this long procedural selection process. This enabled me to gain learning experience from various stakeholders involved in the hiring process.
Looking forward I would like to continue the role with my current establishment as it promises better growth opportunities and compensation too. I believe it also promises a better work-life balance which is required at this stage.
I look forward to better engagement with your concern for future opportunities.
Yours Sincerely
Vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in reference to...
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Line 6, column 182, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...ocess. This enabled me to gain learning experience from various stakeholders involved in t...
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Line 6, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...holders involved in the hiring process. Looking forward I would like to continue...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to bettering', 'to welling'.
Suggestion: to bettering; to welling
...quired at this stage. I look forward to better engagement with your concern for future...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... future opportunities. Yours Sincerely Vinshu
^^^
Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pportunities. Yours Sincerely Vinshu
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17919075145 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97050217812 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635838150289 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9685761339 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168024277825 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660914810806 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664825320957 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815724773001 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668799014047 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.