Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing with regard to an employment offer sent by your company. Although I am thankful for your interest in hiring me, unfortunately I am declining this great opportunity.
The predominant reason behind this decision is the distance required to travel. As workplace location mentioned in offer is located outside of town, which takes about two hours in public transit from my residential area, it is quite far for me to reach since I also do not own any kind of vehicle. Initially, I thought position would be at headquarter in downtown and therefore, applied for this opportunity.
Certainly, the interview was not only limited to testing my knowledge but also developed my interest in some unknown areas thorough exciting questions made by your panel. This left impression on me that how innovative is your firm and would have been great to work for. In addition, it was delightful experience to observe friendly work environment and having few games in office for employees welfare. I am really thankful for providing me a chance to better career prospects.
During the face-to-face conversation, I may have mentioned how much I enjoy to work in my current job and the relation with coworkers here can be considered another cause of putting off this offer. It is at convenient location with accessibility to the public transport. Furthermore, because I have been working there for five years now, it is difficult for me to move on to other company.
Again, I am really grateful for offering this position and hope you understand reasoning.
Your Faithfully,
Mr Krunal Darji
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- :You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to• explain the reason why you decline the offer• express your gratitude• explain you like your current job very much 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s your firm and would have been great to work for. In addition, it was delightful...
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...ty to the public transport. Furthermore, because I have been working there for fi...
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...ion and hope you understand reasoning. Your Faithfully, Mr Krunal Darji
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, therefore, in addition, kind of, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0861423221 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93808159474 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63670411985 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 290.88556701 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5436895582 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122711680042 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438898291403 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479164760198 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.078924521031 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506232355379 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.