You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
explain the reason why you decline the offer
express your gratitude
explain why you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for a job offer for the position of assistant manager and at the same time, I want to apprise you with the reason to reject this offer.
First of all, I would like to thank you for taking the time to assess my candidature and considering me suitable for this position. Also, I am highly impressed with the employee-friendly work culture at your organization and would recommend to my friends as well.
However, after careful deliberation, I have decided to stay at my present company as I think It is not the right time to leave.
My organization is promoting me to the position of a manager and I would be leading a team of more than a hundred, which would be a quite challenging and learning experience for me. Moreover, I would be relocated to Canada after promotion. Therefore, by considering all these opportunities for which I have worked hard for years, I would not be able to accept the position offered by your company.
I hope that you would try to understand my reason for turning down this job offer. Once again, I thank you for believing in my abilities and offering me an opportunity to work for your group.
I regret the inconvenience caused due to this.
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-07 | Sarab.rathor4@gmail.com | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-02 | BIBHU KALITA | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-18 | Ell | 78 | view |
| 2018-12-24 | tejinder15 | 78 | view |
| 2018-12-24 | tejinder15 | 81 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 164, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...uld be a quite challenging and learning experience for me. Moreover, I would be relocated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6872246696 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90682144252 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555066079295 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8330753348 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160871895824 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713260749964 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663183123234 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868228012096 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811421987016 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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