You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
explain the reason why you decline the offer
express your gratitude
explain why you like your current job very much
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am extremely sorry to let you know that I will not join you company, which I suppose to join from 1st of August 2019. I can understand that my decision to reject you offer is not as per the spirit, as I have confirmed earlier after long discussion and salary negotiation.
Actually, major reason why I was looking for a job change was to get financial boost in my career. Apart from that I have no issue with my current organization; I have no problem with colleagues and with my seniors. Moreover, office ambiance is so friendly that I feel as if I am in my second home.
Last week my boss and HR have consulted with me, and suggested salary hike, slightly more than what you offered, with a promotion. Now, I will be looking after a new department of my choice.
Once again, I apologize for the declination of the offer, and I hope, I am able state my reason clearly!
Yours faithfully,
Bibhu Kalita
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| 2019-07-02 | BIBHU KALITA | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-31 | drtruong92 | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-18 | Ell | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, moreover, second, so, apart from, as to, i feel, i suppose, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48235294118 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63329756301 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629411764706 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.6518865336 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 4.34317383033 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160889978123 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654722700413 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533993014264 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912971335226 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581964354492 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.