Your neighbor burns his garbage near your house.
1) complain about the situation.
2) explain about the affects of his actions on your family.
3) suggest a solution.
Dear Mr. James,
I am Ell, your neighbor, living next to your apartment. My objective of writing is to complain about the garbage you often burn in front of my apartment.
I have been observing this since long but then I thought that It is temporary and would be fixed. Unfortunately, now burning of garbage is being noticed every week or so. Therefore, I decided to put my pen on paper.
Burning garbage near one's house is unacceptable and unethical behavior in the society. Moreover, my mother has an asthma problem and by inhaling toxic air after the burn make air quality worst around our house. As you know, evening is the only time for my family to sit together and spend quality of time in our lawn. Sadly, we are not able to do so or step outside our house because of toxic air after burn.
Mr. James, I hope that you would not take this letter as offended. My only intention is to fix this problem mutually. I think that you should start availing the services of municipal corporation, they tend to collect garbage on daily basis. Municipal authorities will either dump or take your garbage into incineration ground and that will be for benefit of society and environment.
I hope you will understand my concern and let me know If we can do anything else together.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ell Green
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 16, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from you. Yours sincerely, Ell Green
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.675 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55065351103 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629166666667 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6721486483 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.125 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170315796013 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549688791729 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672877672519 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747291147231 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962861072821 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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