YOU HAD A COMPANY MEETING IN A HOTEL LAST WEEK. THERE WAS SOME PROBLEM WITH MEETING ROOM FACILITY. WRITE A LETTER TO HOTEL MANAGER TO TALK ABOUT THE MEETING AND THE PROBLEM. ALSO WHAT YOU WANT THE MANAGER TO SO?
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you with regret that, we had a terrible experience during our last meeting at your renowned hotel. We know that it offers great facilities as has been the case in the past. So we opted for your hotel for a high level meeting with foreign delegation. But unfortunately this time our experience was very bad as it did not come up to the mark for which it was famous.
We had multiple problems this time and were extremely disappointed. The sitting and table arrangements were not satisfactory, poor and unhygienic things were noted, table covers were not properly dry cleaned, the furniture was not comfortable, the form was torn and they had no coverings. It brought your impression down as well as embarrassment for us to be the host.
Kindly review and revisit your hotel’s meeting room in order to properly maintain it. Take practical steps on your own to comfort your customers. Hotel necessities should be properly and readily available without any anxiety for the visitors. I hope these problems will be negated prior to our next meeting.
Sincerely,
xyz
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92513368984 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79209941695 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657754010695 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6777376421 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7272727273 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215056430573 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694265631845 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076216856074 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134969412284 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634099811162 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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