Dear John,
It’s been so long since we last were in touch, but I haven’t forgotten all the wonderful times we spent together last year. I have changed the date of my visit to Canada because of an important event at home.
Regarding the event I mentioned earlier, it’s about the house warming of my only sibling. He won the money lottery after so many times of playing. Some of the proceeds were used to purchase this mansion. Given that I’m the only sibling he has, it’s expedient that I stay back and celebrate this impromptu event with him. It wouldn’t be nice if I don’t attend.
In addition to what I have said earlier, I’d like to apologize for any disappointment this have caused you. Plans were made; I couldn’t make the trip because of the event at home. We would do everything we planned to do when I come arrive Canada.
Lastly, I’d suggest that it’s preferable to visit during the summer or the Christmas period. Including other options wouldn’t be necessary, but we can always come up with a better plan that suits both parties.
All the best.
Adam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, It’s been so long since we last were in ...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...lottery after so many times of playing. Some of the proceeds were used to purchase this man...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: ARRIVE_NNP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'arrive in' or 'arrive at'?
Suggestion: arrive in; arrive at
...everything we planned to do when I come arrive Canada. Lastly, I’d suggest that it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75520833333 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44602653091 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651041666667 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4182420326 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2307692308 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205739089434 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698891472964 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117885477596 0.0603063233224 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118515475758 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763562651812 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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