You have been accepted to study at an overseas university, but feel a little anxious about living
and studying in an unfamiliar environment.
Write to the university’s student union. In your letter
• Introduce yourself
• Explain your interests
• Enquire about any relevant social clubs you might be able to join
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to enquire about the university’s social clubs and educational facilities.
My name is Rahi Honarvar, who recently has got the university admission in computer and technology for the next academic semester. I got my bachelor degree of science in computer engineering from one of the renowned universities of my home town, consequently I have never lived overseas and it makes me a little nervous about my new situation.
I have always been interested in doing physical activities including swimming, mountain climbing and cycling as well as jugging. Furthermore, I am talented not only in developing web programs, but also in analyzing the windows based programs.
I would like to know whether there is any club that is relevant to my interests. Moreover, I would be grateful if you could provide me with a list of university social clubs and the annual fee. This way I would be able to choose the appropriate one based on my interests and talents.
Thanks for your help and consideration and look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Rahi Honarvar
I would like to know about the university
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0284924456 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65625 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5325192333 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 4.34317383033 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142518742803 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553058514622 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413712170297 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737633956603 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268321814422 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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