You have been asked to organise a special dinner to celebrate your company’s achievements this year. Write a letter to the restaurant you have chosen. In your letter say
why you want to come to the restaurant and when
how many people will attend the dinner
what special requirements you have
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request a reservation for the special events section at your restaurant, on Friday the 22nd of December, at 6 pm for the celebration of our yearly achievements in Alseef corporation.
To explain, we usually organise the annual event in the purpose of presenting our achieved work, hence our managers from all the company’s sections will attend, including the CEO and a total number of fifty individuals.
As the event is official, we require special decorations that presents the purpose of the night, with a banner that shows the logo of our company in the entrance. Additionally, if it is possible, an open buffet contains middle eastern dishes, including apitisers and desserts will be the optimum choice. I tried your extraordinary kabab before so this might be the main dish along side with barbecue chicken.
Please let me know about all the payment and other details that should be submitted to complete the reservation.
Yours faithfully,
Sara Eltantawy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 376, Rule ID: ALONG_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alongside'?
Suggestion: alongside
...b before so this might be the main dish along side with barbecue chicken. Please let...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26666666667 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96403913728 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709090909091 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7167262786 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.142857143 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133904467671 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558383657321 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356936180139 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665696134135 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416034494361 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 8.15463917526 233% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.