You have recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found that some information is wrong.
Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter, write:
• what the article is about
• what the error is
• what you expect the editor to do
I am writing to you regarding an article in the latest edition of your newspaper, which is about the murder that happened last week by an under-age killer named Rajeh. Although the article was professionally written, there was an inacurate information about the lawyer who defends the criminal.
To explain, the error is that the writer mentioned the name of my father, Mr. Mahmoud Eltantawy, a famous legal consultant, as a lawyer who defends the criminal. While, in fact, my father would never play such a rule that does not match his morals.
As a result, me and my entire family are expecting, in the next edition, a written apology from the writer in which he explains, in the same newspaper's column, the mistake of mentioning our father.
Please give this matter your immediate attention.
Yours faithfully,
Sara Eltantaw.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut the lawyer who defends the criminal. To explain, the error is that the writer...
^^^^
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'newspapers'' or 'newspaper's'?
Suggestion: newspapers'; newspaper's
...riter in which he explains, in the same newspapers column, the mistake of mentioning our f...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e this matter your immediate attention. Yours faithfully, Sara Eltantaw.
^^^^
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mediate attention. Yours faithfully, Sara Eltantaw.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, while, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06474820144 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72005245689 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705035971223 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6013747001 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17244683779 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678900830502 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078676231888 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799759399445 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107196534891 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.