You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working .
In your letter
• describe the work you have been doing
• explain why you can no longer do this work
• recommend another person who is interested in the work
You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working .
In your letter
• describe the work you have been doing
• explain why you can no longer do this work
• recommend another person who is interested in the work
Dear Sir or Madam,
The purpose of this letter is to apprise you that I had been voluntarily associated with the organization from the past six months in the suburbs of Red Avenue.
Just to brief about the voluntary work and the task I had been responsible. Firstly, being an ophthalmologist, I was occupied from Monday – Friday in the campaigns held for the eyes diseases and all visionary disorders. All treatments and medical prescriptions were dealt under the supervision of my team and I. Secondly, during weekends I was actively involved carrying out the emergency and surgical cases for the destitute ones.
Moving to the heart of the matter, the reason I will not be able to support the campaigns and the voluntary work going forward. To begin, it’s the time of the year when all the doctors from AIIMS around the country undergo extensive research on ophthalmology for the period of one year. This opportunity will help the scientific world to excel and make further progress to find the root causes of the prolonging diseases around the world. I consider myself fortunate to be a part of the mission along with others which will commence from the upcoming November 1st week.
In-fact there is no need to feel shattered about absence; however I have my junior with same cognitive skills who will be able to perform all the tasks enthusiastically. He is well informed with the tasks and the schedule I was taking care and is well-verse with the duties. He also holds doctorate degree along with the renowned AIIMS certification.
I hope you will not deny my proposal for recommending discerning body to work for the organization’s welfare. Looking forward to hearing from you and hope for the positive outcome.
Yours faithfully,
Mansi Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.48453608247 254% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 26.3917525773 186% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 937.175257732 197% => OK
No of words: 364.0 206.0 177% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06043956044 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 3.78020617076 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81326509578 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 127.690721649 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565934065934 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 290.88556701 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1214334715 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05555555556 4.34317383033 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478216133012 0.216113520407 221% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165142135659 0.0766984524023 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.234587047838 0.0603063233224 389% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295177285533 0.12726935374 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.279349489989 0.0580467560999 481% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 41.2886597938 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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