You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course at a college Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish explain your position apologize and offer to come on another day or later the sam

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You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course at a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish.
explain your position.
apologize and offer to come on another day or later the same day.
ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Krishna. I applied at your College for a one year course on “Data Communication”. I am glad to know that your college is willing to give me a chance to join by inviting me to attend the interview for the course. Unfortunately, I am afraid to inform you that I will not be able to attend the interview on the scheduled date which is the 27th March.

I have been working in a Multi-national company for the past 3 years. One important seminar is going to happen on 27th March and I have already made a commitment to my boss that I will be there to participate in the seminar. It is necessary for my work to attend the Seminar and I can not bail on my commitment.

Therefore, I would like to apologize for the inconvenience and would like to request you to reschedule my interview. It is important for me to join the course as I want to upgrade my skill so I would highly appreciate it if you can allow me to attend the interview on another day. It would be great if you could provide details of the interview duration so that I will be able to understand that I should take a half-day or full-day leave at my work. My sincere apology for the inconvenience and hope you would accept my request to reschedule the interview.

In anticipation waiting for your positive response at earliest.

Yours Faithfully,
Krishna Parmar

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at your College for a one year course on “Data Communication”. I am glad to know ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, i am afraid

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91781013776 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488 0.622605031667 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6811186841 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7692307692 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254630043143 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979628016049 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549751959231 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157633682291 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514312194254 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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