You have been invited to give a talk at a local community college in America about your home country. Write a letter to the secretary of the college.
In your letter
- accept the invitation and offer a possible
- summarize what information you will include in the talk
- say what equipment you will need the college to arrange for you to give a small talk
Dear Mr. Jones,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for your college invitation card to give a small talk about industry practices of robotics and automation.
I would love to come to your prestigious educational institute to share my knowledge of artificial intelligence and its applications. Since I am available on coming Monday or Tuesday for presenting a presentation on artificial intelligence, please update me with the final day to come to your college.
I will discuss few projects that are associated with real-world data applications such as image processing, marketing predictions, and regression methods. In the end, I will show the effects and outcomes on modern society with the rise of automation nowadays.
It would be great if you could please arrange the required types of equipment such as speakers, microphone, cable, and projector as I will delivering my speech in the form of a PowerPoint presentation.
I am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: deliver
...icrophone cable and projector as I will delivering my speech in the form of a PowerPoint p...
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Suggestion:
...in the form of a PowerPoint presentation I am looking forward to seeing you soon ...
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Suggestion:
...u soon Yours sincerely Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18404907975 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08648105663 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662576687117 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 163.0 16.3608247423 996% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 845.0 76.5299724578 1104% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 163.0 16.8248392259 969% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 4.34317383033 484% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19555208485 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19555208485 0.0766984524023 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981161319507 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860775971546 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 84.5 8.37731958763 1009% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -102.43 70.7449484536 -145% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 68.0 7.45979381443 912% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.95 8.71597938144 160% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.47 7.59969072165 217% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 8.62886597938 730% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 67.2 8.54432989691 786% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 68.0 8.15463917526 834% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.