You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have
never visited before. You have an acquaintance who lives there.
Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter
• explain your situation
• say why you feel unsure about living in the city
• ask some questions about life in the city
Dear Sally,
It has been ages since we last wrote to each other. I have great news for you that I recently got a job opportunity in your hometown, Karachi. However, I am bit confuse about accepting this job proposal. I wonder if you could advise me about the city, since you have been living there for a while.
I have never been to Karachi. It would be my first experience, so I am confused whether I would like living there. I need your advice before making the decision to accept the job and move over there.
One thing I am anxious about is the weather of your town. I have heard that it remain humid and hot all the year. Is this true? The next thing, suggest me the leisure activities that I can do there during my free time, in the evenings or on the weekends, so that I could not feel boredom. Finally, the important problem is housing and food. I have heard that it’s expensive to live in big city, Karachi. What is the montly expenditure of the food and accommodation?
I would appreciate if could take time to answers my question. If I decide to accept the job offered in your city, then we would have ample time to do frequent get together.
Waiting for your reply,
Best Wishes,
Sara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...n your hometown, Karachi. However, I am bit confuse about accepting this job propos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43111111111 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37261745341 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2853840114 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.6470588235 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2352941176 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58823529412 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26754122787 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747424924588 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862599556341 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135323047686 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091929836763 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.