You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before.You have a friend who lives there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1) Explain your situation
2) Say why you feel unsure about living in the city
3) Ask some question about life in the city.
Hope you’re doing well. Recently I’ve offered a job in your city. As you already know, till date, I worked in my hometown. So, somewhere I’m tensed of leaving home.
The salary structure is good but unsure about few things. Firstly, could you please provide me an information on job opportunities in your city? Is the city in developing stage like have good career opportunities or not. Is it possible for consider an immense career growth in your city?
Secondly, is this city is lacking in any basic amenities like electricity failures or water supply issues etc. I need to know a little bit about lifestyle too. Is the living style over there is entertaining or not, Is it same as metro cities. Lifestyle plays a major role in corporate industries. It improves our communication skill, sense of living, elegance and most importantly improve etiquettes.
Please write to me whenever possible. Look forward for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Ravi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... somewhere I’m tensed of leaving home. The salary structure is good but unsure ...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ter supply issues etc. I need to know a little bit about lifestyle too. Is the living styl...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251366120219 0.220444632235 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.158469945355 0.167888034529 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0928961748634 0.0606518309736 153% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0710382513661 0.0506257000042 140% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0819672131148 0.118615021944 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103825136612 0.107062808482 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0273224043716 0.041066498444 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77323547764 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0109289617486 0.0385302599488 28% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0546448087432 0.0714148451538 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00546448087432 0.0191574576366 29% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00546448087432 0.00930345855455 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 967.0 1141.60824742 85% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.134020619 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08176100629 5.53046319177 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78085437643 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352201257862 0.284621296913 124% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251572327044 0.211203875043 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182389937107 0.133321485273 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125786163522 0.0843313296314 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77323547764 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.735849056604 0.622163163488 118% => OK
Word variations: 86.27636071 62.8969750728 137% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 9.9375 16.4300151701 60% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7439313237 44.7399317507 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4375 90.9928171075 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 9.9375 16.4300151701 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.613754768223 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 7.22680412371 55% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Readability: 35.0947327044 37.5504026743 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.22807017544 1.13073093955 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253017228173 0.331212695627 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.037130777999 0.0927372745006 40% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0691851381669 0.0736520305886 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.455021662809 0.662452444078 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124889210512 0.233577193048 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811780707776 0.122183219658 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645237191702 0.0765303033291 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.145065494586 0.110270004696 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.097244596235 0.120535355502 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15867353742 0.120397337282 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637034986065 0.113578534861 56% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.48453608247 202% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.54639175258 66% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 1.0824742268 277% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.62886597938 152% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.25773195876 121% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.