You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before.You have a friend who lives there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1) Explain your situation 2) Say why you feel unsure about living in th

Dear Marcel,

How are you doing? How is your life there in Toronto? Sorry for having been absent for a while, due to the IELTS exam, I have been with full attention and time focused on studying English. As result, I got some news I want you to know.

I got a good grade and because of that I received not only the permanent resident Visa, but also an offer of job in your city. That is really amazing, but as I am well settled here with my wife, that also works in a great stable and well paid job, I am tensed of leaving to seek this opportunity, and maybe you can help me with some information from a person that already lives there, and had faced the same questions I have now.
In the first place, can you tell me about the cost of living there? Is it easy to live with an engineer salary? How hard is to find a Job with our kind of University Degree?
I will be glad if you can share you view, this certainly will help me to decide.

Yours faithfully,

Viegas

Votes
Average: 7 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, so, well, while, kind of, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16315789474 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13316380328 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.2258497184 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9090909091 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32054874337 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114003527948 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517539656594 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185136716793 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382904236501 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.