Dear Marcel,
How are you doing? How is your life there in Toronto? Sorry for having been absent for a while, due to the IELTS exam, I have been with full attention and time focused on studying English. As result, I got some news I want you to know.
I got a good grade and because of that I received not only the permanent resident Visa, but also an offer of job in your city. That is really amazing, but as I am well settled here with my wife, that also works in a great stable and well paid job, I am tensed of leaving to seek this opportunity, and maybe you can help me with some information from a person that already lives there, and had faced the same questions I have now.
In the first place, can you tell me about the cost of living there? Is it easy to live with an engineer salary? How hard is to find a Job with our kind of University Degree?
I will be glad if you can share you view, this certainly will help me to decide.
Yours faithfully,
Viegas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...information that will help me to decide whether or not to move to Toronto. In the first pla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, well, while, kind of, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17708333333 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19808944818 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6507976875 44.8134815571 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292644778247 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111963260129 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388205424457 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163524730624 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435398534305 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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