You have bought an item of clothing at an online store. However, when the item arrived it was the wrong size and colour. Write a letter to the customer service manager of the company. In your letter•describe the problem•say how you feel about this•
Dear Sir,
I am compelled to write this letter to you owing to receive incorrect size and color of top. I ordered a blue color top from your website on 29th August 2018 and even before ordering I checked the availability of size and color I wanted. I was captivated by the modern design of cloth and planned to wear on the 12th wedding anniversary which is on 6th September, that is, three days from today.
In order to make sure that cloth is delivered on time, I opted for premium delivery and paid INR 200 extra. However it seems like that not only the money but the plan to look gorgeous going in vain. I was solely rely on this and did not buy any other new cloths for a party.
I am not sure whether chosen size and color of attire can be delivered by 5th september but certainly I am disappointed by the unprofessional service from your esteemed organization. If you make arrangements to deliver the original size, it will be an excitement for me. You may ask the courier boy to collect the item anytime between 12:30 pm to 2:00 pm.
Your’s faithfully,
Pama
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am compelled to write this letter to y...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...remium delivery and paid INR 200 extra. However it seems like that not only the money b...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
...ok gorgeous going in vain. I was solely rely on this and did not buy any other new c...
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Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...attire can be delivered by 5th september but certainly I am disappointed by the u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47474747475 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58670677377 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6170153812 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182276100223 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645813627775 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494006695767 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921690168689 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416504434465 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.