Dear Sir or Madam,
My name's Ali Akbar. I am writing to inform you that the camera I returned to your company to be repaired still has some issues.
As you know, I purchased the camera recently after seeing it in your online store. I liked it due to its configuration and good value which looked to me tempting. How surprised when my family and friends when they first saw it. That time I decided to test the gadget. After I took a few pictures it stopped working properly. There was something wrong with it. The camera just stopped taking photos that appeared to me strange. I went on pressing the button but it wouldn't work. I tried to search solution on internet. Everybody was advising to perform various operations but one person told me not to do anything else but to apply to your company owing to my having the receipt saying I have a guarrantied chechup. When I returned it back to your shop, it was received by the store stuff and I was assured that I should come in a week. But after the second visit I found it still missfunctioned.
I hope you will be able to look into my case as soon as possible and I am looking forward to your promt response.
Yours faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam My names Ali Akbar. I am w...
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Line 4, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...That time I decided to test the gadget. After I took a few pictures it stopped workin...
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Line 4, column 542, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'performing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'advise' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: performing
...ion on internet. Everybody was advising to perform various operations but one person told ...
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Line 4, column 706, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the receipt saying I have a guarrantied chechup. When I returned it back to your...
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Line 6, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nto my case as soon as possible and I am looking forward to your promt response. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, second, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39545454545 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47788149317 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2420061254 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4666666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2355485498 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633742374624 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873189239596 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174054482688 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742004580372 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.