With the advent of sport programs, they have become irreplaceable parts of non-stop television shows. Though some hold the view that this nowadays trend can dissuade youngsters from being involved in sport activities, it is my belief that sport programs the other way round can motivate young people in engaging it.
Let’s begin by looking at views why some believe that sport puts the young off from doing it. Firstly, sport programs have gone beyond the scope of just television. These days it is noticeably that most people regardless of their age prefer watching sport transmissions on their gadgets due to the development of the latest technologies. That is to say sport events are more accessible than they used to be. Consequently, youngsters would favor watching sport events rather than just doing it. Secondly, online betting services might become new engagement for youngsters instead of taking up sport. For instance, I know a friend of mine who though is in his thirties, beside spending most of his spare time, bets for one team. Increasing number of teenagers can be in his place. As a result, they find these activities more attractive to ones which can facilitate more for their well-being.
Sport broadcastings on the other hand can have a number of reasons for engaging in it. First of all, it can inspire the youth to do it. Football is a good illustration. Owing to its widespread popularity individuals, particularly youngsters who engage it are on the rise. In spite of the fact they spend hours before monitors watching this sport they eventually become enthusiastic about playing it with their mates in open air by kicking the ball. Call for keeping fit and being healthy is another reason. Sport beyond all doubt cannot only motive by being interesting but may be a good pusher of starting dealing with your well-being. A good example is Olympic games. Those who watch events like marathons or martial arts during these games involuntary starts thinking of his abilities in these activities. Besides people concert about their health and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, as a result, first of all, in spite of, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03498542274 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69644785436 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594752186589 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9405811367 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2380952381 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38095238095 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194055136555 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527135582465 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618398794515 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159988987666 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775660513647 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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