You have decide to leave your currnt job and look for a new one Write letter to a friend In your letter Explain why you want to leave your current job What kind of a job you are looking for Ask for some help and advice

Essay topics:

You have decide to leave your currnt job and look for a new one.

Write letter to a friend. In your letter,

Explain why you want to leave your current job
What kind of a job you are looking for
Ask for some help and advice.

Dear joy,

Hello!!! I hope this letter finds you in best of your health and spirit. I write this letter to seek your help in finding of a new job, as I want to leave my current job. I leave my job due to 2 resons. Firstly, My office place is far away from my house. It has consuming 2 hours in travelling. Secondly, I will not find more future growth in this company.

I prefer those company which is near by my house, so Ican utilize my travelling time in my work and also find MNC type of company where I can see my future growth.

As you are in the similar field so I request you that , if you find any vacancy in your company , please do give my reference as I also have 3 years experience. I send my resume to you along with this letter.

Hope to here from you soon.

Your friend,
Trupti.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...job, as I want to leave my current job. I leave my job due to 2 resons. Firstly, ...
^
Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'those companies'?
Suggestion: this company; those companies
...ure growth in this company. I prefer those company which is near by my house, so Ican util...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 33, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...any. I prefer those company which is near by my house, so Ican utilize my travelling...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the similar field so I request you that , if you find any vacancy in your company...
^^
Line 8, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... if you find any vacancy in your company , please do give my reference as I also h...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 655.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14556962025 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17979894428 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0462931035 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5454545455 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261375123567 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121490763377 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110596129432 0.0603063233224 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149702314415 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105863471686 0.0580467560999 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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