You have decided to go on a holiday to a foreign country for two weeks, and you want one of your friends to go with you. Write a letter to your friend asking him to accompany you. In your letter,
- Explain where and when you want to go
- Give details of the travel, dates and cost involved
- Describe some of the things you want to do.
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am very excited to inform you that my tourist visa to USA has been approved and I am writing this letter to invite you to accompany me for a tour to my brother's house in Newyork next month.
Actually last week, I got my visa approved and I am sure due to your project you also have visa to USA for next three years. It is a great time to visit USA, we could enjoy the various national festivals such as Halloween, Thanksgiving and the most importantly the Christmas. It would really be a great fun. I have planned to go during 1st week of November and stay for two weeks. Even we do not have to worry about accommodation as we could stay freely at my brother's place, the only cost involved will be travel tickets and some shopping that we would do over there.
My brother has also promised to take us to the world's famous waterfall (Niagra falls) there we could cherish the natural beauty and the spectacular fireworks at night. Also, we could find the best deals on shopping during the very famous annual sale on Black Friday.
Eagerly waiting for positive response from you soon, so that I book round trip tickets for both of us and do other arrangements.
Warm Regards
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear john, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'visaed'.
Suggestion: visaed
... sure due to your project you also have visa to USA for next three years. It is a gr...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... both of us and do other arrangements. Warm Regards Harry
^^^
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... do other arrangements. Warm Regards Harry
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, really, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43220338983 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33876810607 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5345175961 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0909090909 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191744104414 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672275959167 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738812286599 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112619627357 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797249827833 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.