You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one.Write a letter to a friend. In your letter• explain why you want to leave your current job• describe what kind of job you are looking for• ask for some help or advice

Essay topics:

You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one.

Write a letter to a friend. In your letter

• explain why you want to leave your current job

• describe what kind of job you are looking for

• ask for some help or advice

Dear Deepika,

Hope you are doing well, I am writing this to you in regards of my professional career. As you are aware, I have been working in my current organization for five years and now I am feeling I should switch to some other company for better growth and new learning.

Here in my company, i am aligned to same project and same designation from beginning and have learned everything, like all processes and functions of it. Hence, there is no new learning left for me over here and i am sensing from inside I deserve designation elevation. I talked to manager regarding my promotion and tabled all my great contribution towards project and remarkable work appreciations that I got from my client; but I didn't get any satisfactory response from him.

So i have decided to leave my organization and join new one. i am seeking for an opportunity to work with multinational IT firm. As they have operations across the globe and i have never been outside from country for work and i am looking for having experience working at client location. In such companies there are diversified project that gives abundance of learning.

My friend, you have good experience of working with different IT firms and have contacts over there. it would be great if you can refer my resume to some good companies. it will help me to get easy interview calls from these companies.

i am attaching my detailed resume with letter, please find it in same envelope.

Looking forward to hearing you soon.

Thanks

Your Mate

Raju

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Average: 7.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...re doing well, I am writing this to you in regards of my professional career. As you are awar...
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd new learning. Here in my company, i am aligned to same project and same des...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... new learning left for me over here and i am sensing from inside I deserve design...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ations that I got from my client; but I didnt get any satisfactory response from him....
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...leave my organization and join new one. i am seeking for an opportunity to work w...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...leave my organization and join new one. i am seeking for an opportunity to work w...
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Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'firms'?
Suggestion: firms
...portunity to work with multinational IT firm. As they have operations across the glo...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... been outside from country for work and i am looking for having experience workin...
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Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... IT firms and have contacts over there. it would be great if you can refer my resu...
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Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...refer my resume to some good companies. it will help me to get easy interview call...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...nterview calls from these companies. i am attaching my detailed resume with le...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nterview calls from these companies. i am attaching my detailed resume with le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, regarding, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79166666667 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77197166389 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0697127029 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22807334993 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833319504353 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606029480774 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122529924668 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685297381166 0.0580467560999 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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