You have found a new job. Write a letter to a friend about it. In your letter.
• Explain why you made the change
• Tell your friend something about the new job
• Ask your friend to get together to celebrate
Dear Jess,
You won’t believe what I have to tell you! I finally made the decision to change jobs. You’re probably wondering what took me so long. Remember how you’ve been saying that I’d be more challenged working in finance? Well, guess what? That’s right, I’m moving to Johnson and Johnson’s finance department next month. Yippee!
This is going to be such an amazing opportunity for me. I’m going to be able to get first-hand experience as a business analyst in a large international company. The budget for this place is ten times my current company’s and the team I’ll be working with are all very experienced so I’m going to be learning a lot from this job. Once I have these skills under my belt, I’ll be able to move into the global arena and maybe work in France. You know that’s always been my dream.
I’m thrilled out of my mind right now and need someone to celebrate with. Why don’t we meet at the docks this Saturday night for dinner? I’ll buy and we’ll toast to friends helping friends. After all, if it wasn’t for your encouragement, I’d probably be stuck in that marketing job in Toronto for the rest of my life.
Let me know if you can make it Saturday. I’d love to be clinking glasses by 7 p.m.
All the best,
Wanda
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sses by 7 p.m. All the best, Wanda
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, so, well, after all, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95175438596 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80741156774 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679824561404 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5197241102 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5625 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0935376624895 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386742793791 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406281627765 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627891003254 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233845515511 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.