In your apartment building there is an entrance hall which you share with your neighbours. Recently there have been some problems with this shared area. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
introduce yourself and describe the problem or problems
suggest what could be done to improve the situation
suggest a meeting to talk about it
Dear Neighbors,
I am Sen Gupta, residing at flat number 101, which is adjacent to entrance hall of the building. I am writing to highlight some concerns regarding the entrance hall which is shared by everyone. But, in the past couple of weeks, it has been observed by my family members that many of us use the entrance hall to put our leftovers in open space. These leftovers are creating foul smell in the lift lobby and flats near to entrance hall. Due to this, it has become very difficult for all to walk in this area.
I would like to suggest some ways, which could be helpful to get rid of this issue. Primarily, we can throw these belongings directly outside the apartment rather than putting them in entrance hall. Secondly, we can hire someone to collect these leftovers directly from our doorsteps which could be more benficial. Lastly, we can keep it in our store rooms, if it's not smelling bad.
Let's have a meeting to discuss this issue further as soon as possible, so that we can resolve it going forward. In this meeting, we can have everyone's opinion and suggestions to resolve this particular issue. Moreover, we can give more suggestions from everyone if they have any better idea.
Looking forward to hear from all the neighbors.
Yours sincerely,
Malvika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...tore rooms, if its not smelling bad. Lets have a meeting to discuss this issue fu...
^^^^
Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...a meeting to discuss this issue further as soon as possible, so that we can resolv...
^^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ave any better idea. Looking forward to hear from all the neighbors. Yours sincer...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78125 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46149800266 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633928571429 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3514280335 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1651055719 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061753826235 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565601150956 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675176092963 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561239909545 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.