You have a friend who lives in a different country. You will organise a party soon and have thought to use a foreign recipe. Write a letter to the friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party you are organizing.
In your letter,
• tell your friend about the party
• ask for the recipe
• explain why you need the recipe from his/her country.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ............,
Dear Simon,
Hope you’re doing well! I would like to tell you one good news and that is , yesterday I got promoted as Head of the department in our organization.
I was planning to organize my birthday party by this weekend and now it’s time for double celebration. So, I thought to throw small party at once with my friends and families.
Lately when I visited your home, you have prepared pink pasta for me. It was so delicious that, I emptied the entire bowl of pasta within no time. It would be great, if you could tell me the recipe of that dish, as I am planning to inculcate that food item in the menu.
Most of my friends and family members are fond of pasta. So, by having this delicacy in main course , I’m sure they would be loving this item, as much I felt in love for that.
I would really thank you in advance, also you have to stay with us, as you are planning to visit our town during summer vacation.
Best Regards,
Tim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ke to tell you one good news and that is , yesterday I got promoted as Head of the...
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Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., by having this delicacy in main course , I'm sure they would be loving this...
^^
Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... main course , I'm sure they would be loving this item, as much I felt in love for t...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43016759777 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30985482692 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664804469274 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4101436849 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2598352078 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092045959568 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663886039847 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136610019516 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036260260887 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.