You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.
You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I am Abhishek Jog from the second regular batch for 'Quality Six Sigma Traning' batch held by you every weekday. I am writing to discuss the unavoidable situation at my end which has made me dropthe course.
As you are aware of my full-time job as an engineer at Oracle financial services. There have been some new advancements in the current project of mine and the end project release deadlines are made more stringent. Apart from this, I am also working on two more projects which are deliverable at this month end. Being at the center, My responsibilities have increased tremendously. In order to code up the pressure, I have to work in my free time.
I have tried working parallelly for following the course and work. However, It has been difficult for me to address both at the same time. I have decided to keep the training for 'Quality Six Sigma Traning' on hold for time being. The training is very important to me, as it would help me uplift my career growth. I would request you to please help me shift my course timelines, if possible to end of June.
I am very much interested to complete the course. Please help me. I would like to hear back from you. I would also appreciate if there are any other ways which could help me complete or follow the course.
Yours sincerely,
Abhishek Jog
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- You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.You now find that you cannot continue the course.Write a letter to your teachers. In your letterdescribe the situationexplain why you cannot continue at this timesay what action yo 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58403361345 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56961887767 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567226890756 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3466802536 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.1764705882 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41176470588 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195588918839 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621211904158 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545440751833 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118190572257 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285611002268 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.