Dear Sara,
My name is Nasim, I and my husband am your new neighbor and we have come here just a few days ago.
To be honest I want to inform you that at the weekend on Sunday evening I am planning to hold a party. I invited my relatives, friends to my new house to celebrate my husband's birthday. I chose a special theme, asking my guests to put on black and white dresses. For sure there will be loud music for dancing and every essential things for drinking and eating, at the end of the party it should be a birthday cake with candles on it for surprising my husband, he will be happy so much.
After all, this letter is for asking you to come because I want to have you and your sweet family in my party. We can have fun and it would be a good chance for us to be familiar with each other.
Best regards,
Nasim
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.05521472393 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14925409415 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1971568789 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.625 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208961334071 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860263678612 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920972453163 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1633459462 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567068883504 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.27 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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