These daye some people believe that schools should teach their students how to be a good parent in the future beside their
principal lessons.
In my opinion it is a very fantastic idea to teach young every young person the skills of being parent, because in 21st century
everything growing so fast, technology in particular have changed quickly and just be a tradition parent does not work any
more, for instance when I was at high school there was a program for us to learn these skills every session our counselor put
us in a challengeable situation and wanted us to find a reliable solution for that, she told us you can consult with your
partner, however sometimes we could not be able to find the best answer but we understood many methods which I can use
today to be a good mother for my cute daughter.
To some extended there are many things a person should know before getting a parent, I myself although learned a lot in
school but always there are more. For example when I and my husband decided to be a parent I started to go to some
special classes on how to treat with your children from the first day of born, besides I read many books 3 hours a day.
In conclusion, parents play the most important role in their children's life. So if societies want to have normal and
intelligent people, they should be aware of teaching young students to be a perfect parent for their children.
- It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience. 65
- Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. 61
- more and more students choose to go to another country for their higher education. do u think the benefits outweigh the problems associated with it? 78
- Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? give reasons and relevant examples. 56
- You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:•introduce yourself•describe your plans for the party•invite your neighbor to 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65098039216 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42473477227 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 204.123873066 49.4020404114 413% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.666666667 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.5 20.7667163134 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06120827912 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413416715158 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185402728978 0.084324248473 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905890640852 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147564123945 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102801963302 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.58 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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