Nowadays, in most of the houses there is at least one computer. Most psychologists believe that using computers by young children are increasing dramatically and mental problems which are related to that raising at the same time.
In my opinion, computers effect on children behavior in a bad way, as we see in the society, children prefer staying home and play with their computers. There are a few children in parks or any public places. For more explanation I want to mention one of my experience, I knew one family that had many problems with their son. The boy did not have any friends and he was always alone. This manner effected his relationships in the school as a result he got depresses. However he never saw any anger in the street he learned anger from the games, So all the time he was yelling and fight with his classmates.
The other side effect of computers on young children is that their communications and social skills may cause their jobs and marriage. They won't be able to choose their career as easy as other people.
In conclusion, if we want healthy future for our family and bigger society such as country it should be more care and more training for families, that help them to solve this big problem which disturb their young children's attention.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
..., computers effect on children behavior in a bad way, as we see in the society, children pre...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...he school as a result he got depresses. However he never saw any anger in the street he...
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Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to anger'
Suggestion: to anger
... saw any anger in the street he learned anger from the games, So all the time he was ...
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Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isturb their young childrens attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, at least, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69333333333 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56181262988 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9277140912 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14631121409 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537028061228 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462785502324 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866972836381 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00422739455203 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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