Dear Gabriella,
My name is Mrs. Abosede. I live two blocks away from you. I recently moved in with my family five days ago.
I am writing to inform you of an upcoming party next weekend.
My son's birthday is next week Saturday while my husbands' tomorrow. We intend have a big party and I am worried the noise will be unbearable for you. The party will be in two phases: one, to celebrate my son and the other my husband.
There would be a lot of children activities as well as games. The children's party will take place between noon and 4pm while the adult party will commence at 7pm till 1am. Also, we would have a lot of friends and family stay over. I am particularly imploring you to bear with us for the inconveniences this event may cause you.
I am also using this medium to invite you and your family for the event. It promises to be fun. I would appreciate if you can grace the occasion, especially your wards.
Thank you as I look forward to welcoming you and your family.
Yours sincerely,
Abosede.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...moved in with my family five days ago. I am writing to inform you of an upcoming...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46031746032 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42842733374 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608465608466 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9085987408 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.6875 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8125 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243032656468 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086775801666 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950649947846 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129284854162 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952715496464 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.7 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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