Dear Mr. Jason,
I am writing to inform you of the uncomfortable situation of my apartment.
Currently, I reside at the Queen's apartment, block D, room 412. I am a third year student studying Mathematics. My roommate is a final year student in Mass communication department.
She plays loud music at all times. Even when I am studying, the volume of the music is never reduced.
Also, she holds a party every weekend not minding my presence. These actions have made life unbearable for me.
At other times, my roommate invites friends over for the weekend. Recently, she cultivated the habit of leaving the room untidy. Although, I had come up with a cleaning roaster but she has never followed through. The room is always untidy. I spend considerable amount of time to keep the apartment in order. The time I spend can easily be used for other activities such as studying. Finally, she takes my belongings without permission. Last week, I borrowed a book from the library, she took the book off my bookshelf and gave it to a friend. I asked her and she admitted giving it to her friend. The return date for the book is past and I had to pay penalty.
I was hoping you could arrange an alternative accommodation for me next semester. As my final year is approaching, I would be needing a sane and comfortable environment to study. Presently, I am a first class student and intend to keep my academic records outstanding.
I would appreciate if my request can be granted. I look forward to a favourable response from you.
Yours faithfully,
Abosede Dada.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 32, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'alternative accommodation'.
Suggestion: alternative accommodation
...alty. I was hoping you could arrange an alternative accommodation for me next semester. As my final year ...
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Line 10, column 124, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s my final year is approaching, I would be needing a sane and comfortable environment to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 273.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77289377289 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87785299563 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.13402061856 230% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 12.6804123711 189% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1492693554 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.2916666667 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.375 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29166666667 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.94845360825 279% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107194022265 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299406071855 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341050635148 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058237750555 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402484604308 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.2 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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