You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour Write a letter to your neighbour In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to co

Essay topics:

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.

Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter

introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Mr. Joshi,
I am Ankur Deshpande, and the new owner of the flat just besides you. Hope you are doing fine as we have not got a chance to meet yet. I have been busy with the shifting and was unable to meet you in person.

I and my wife have kept a small celebration for our close family and friends at our new home. My friends circle has a group of lively people and I am afraid that the music would be loud for a couple of hours. I apologize in advance for torture that is going to be caused.

In fact, you must come to the party as well, as there cannot be a better occasion for us to meet. I am sure that you and your family will have an excellent time. My wife is going to cook and in my opinion she is the best chef ever.

Yours truly,
Ankur

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Joshi, I am Ankur Deshpande, and the new owner ...
^^^
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... best chef ever. Yours truly, Ankur
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, well, in fact, i am afraid, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 608.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.92258064516 4.54256449028 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.92260229475 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 195.3 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.6536001428 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.8 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193066510881 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805168466688 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669621116327 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109509892757 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429319547684 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.16 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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